ahh.
pink
nice. P:

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very good and helpfull comment thanks a lot

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Wow, this is looking good man! Keep it up!

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a little bit scary, but in another way its delicious. her eyes..!

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I just call my model Honghong, and ask she come to see this great works. She is very happy. And thank you for the drawing.

It's really great.

I apologize for the inconvience I may have caused with my quick and obviously unsatisfactory comment on your artwork. In an attempt to redeem myself from my foolish halfhearted behavior of quickly browsing images which caught my taste I will make a real effort this second go around to critique your work, as you put effort into the piece, you probably expect some effort and feedback from the viewers here at deviantART.

1) The colours. It's not just pink, but you've shaded it. This makes sure it's not just left to a paint filler. It adds dimension and feeling to the piece. this has 3 main colours from which I can tell. white, black, and the colour which is used to represent females (most of the time), pink.

2) the subject. A young female. she is too wearing pink. a white pokadot hair "thing" (sorry the name eludes me). I am guessing this provides evidence that she is young. it's cute. HOWEVER one thing bothers me, and i'd appriciate an explaination why you leave the edges of her face so blurred. I can understand worry that trying to provide an actual shape could ruin it, but I believe you could give a bold border (but not too thick) to it and give it a bit more. again however, personal pref probably.

3) the art as a whole. I am unsure what it is the subject is between. my first guess is locker doors. I am curious what they really are though. I am still bothered by the blurring of the edges of her face though

overall from a scale of 1 to 10 i'd give this an 8.

infact, after looking at it longer, the blurring of the edges is needed. it adds a softness that you'd expect it a younger person (most of the time).

i'd hang it on my wall. thumbs up. sorry for the original meaningless review of your work.

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i like, overall it's great, and it would be nice to see it as a wall...

things that could be better :

the colar and the dice ( dunno if it's the right word ) doesn't have shadow

the rest is fine

I'm impressed Enkera.

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